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Fighting back

Fighting back

1.7K Reads 38 Votes 8 Part Story
secil (sechil) By TurkishGirl1998 Updated Jun 08, 2011

Nora Brannings was a normal girl, but what happens when a man tells her something that changes her life forever?

TurkishGirl1998 TurkishGirl1998 Apr 17, 2011
@Jimgon21  aha thanks i didnt even realize. :) ill have to pay more attention when i re read :)
markschmoyer markschmoyer Apr 15, 2011
Hi! Pretty good! A few grammar things like using a period where you have a coma, and also, in the first paragraph, hair goes down, not up :) hahah 
Spi3rt Spi3rt Jan 31, 2011
this is what i was meant to write------Thanks secil u put me in ur top bit :D good work, as always ;) and ur secret is safe with me ♥