A young girl has been trapped to her house since she was a child. Now as a teenager, with the mind of a child she is willing to break the lines to which she is bonded to and going on the ride of her life.
I like this story, its different then allthe other.. But i feel like its rushed you know.if you explain or show why they are like they are, then this story willbe epic i tell you
I really like where your going with this. Theres nothing really I can say that someone hasn't already. So I'm just going to say I really enjoy reading this. It's going in my library for sure. :D
I think it's a good start. I agree with the comments below, a little bit rushed and a little more insight into Wendy and Colleen would be good. I like the story idea, it's unique/original, which is good! (: Seperate your paragraphs, so it's more neater too :) Keep writing!
your story is rele goo!!!! and sry but so far i have found nothing for u to change