Inert

Inert

866 Reads 350 Votes 9 Part Story
Ashley Tan By ashleytanzq Completed

The Grandis are scared of the Literi, ever since the war that occurred two years ago. Not much is known about them, except they killed almost all the children and Elders. Despite all the warnings, Abban is curious about what is in the Forest. Join him as he discovers the truth.

  • adults
  • children
  • completed
  • kids
  • labor
  • sci-fi
  • scifi
  • slavery
  • war
Love_and_Kalopsia Love_and_Kalopsia Aug 27, 2017
Nice start, I would love some deeper dexceptions however to give it more POW!
NovaMinxxy NovaMinxxy Aug 30, 2017
At first I'm like "this is a girl" lol but reading it I realized that his thoughts and mannerism was that of a boy (I don't write from a boy's perspective so I find it awesome). I see no mistakes! And I like it!
AzurePhoenixX3 AzurePhoenixX3 Aug 23, 2017
I would probably fail at being a maid. I would become SO lazy... I would poke it with a tissue and call it clean. XD
                              Daily work is indelible on my persona!!
Deedra02 Deedra02 Sep 19, 2017
The writting technique is that of a college professional.  I like it
AnastasiaThomas089 AnastasiaThomas089 Sep 01, 2017
This is really interesting. I really like your writing style. I'd hate to eat food pills everyday!
NovaMinxxy NovaMinxxy Aug 30, 2017
At first I'm like "this is a girl" lol but reading it I realized that his thoughts and mannerism was that of a boy (I don't write from a boy's perspective so I find it awesome). I see no mistakes! And I like it!