Alyssa's parents left her and her sister with her Aunt Vicky. Daniela (Alyssa's oleder sister) diappears and leaves Alyssa to face all their problems alone. Will she come back? And will she ever find their parents?
@AllieAngel6439 lol idk if i would i don't like reading people's mess ups. It paranios me.
I love how you use the imagery, and your use of diction is wonderful. Only I must say that your story does leave room for question and is a bit patchy if not jumpy.
This is Ysa, Alli:
I was wondernig. does he really need "vampire strength" to pick up a six year old? Haha just a thought.
@AllieAngel6439 Leave a comment! I want your opinion about it :)
@Angelina_np Thanks lots nd yea i love reading stories so will check it out :D
Uhm! Vampire and Werewolves in one! That's something girl. Keep writing, I want the rest of the story! :D
If you want read my story and vote. :)