The dangers of being a vampire-werewolf

The dangers of being a vampire-werewolf

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Allie By AllieAngel6439 Updated Jan 24, 2011

Alyssa's parents left her and her sister with her Aunt Vicky. Daniela (Alyssa's oleder sister) diappears and leaves Alyssa to face all their problems alone. Will she come back? And will she ever find their parents?

TheGreenGurl TheGreenGurl Apr 20, 2011
@AllieAngel6439 lol idk if i would i don't like reading people's mess ups. It paranios me.
whitewolf988 whitewolf988 Feb 04, 2011
@whitewolf988 
                              Still ysa:
                              I love how you use the imagery, and your use of diction is wonderful. Only I must say that your story does leave room for question and is a bit patchy if not jumpy.
                              ~ thegreengurl
whitewolf988 whitewolf988 Feb 04, 2011
This is Ysa, Alli:
                              
                              I was wondernig. does he really need "vampire strength" to pick up a six year old? Haha just a thought.
Angelina_np Angelina_np Jan 24, 2011
@AllieAngel6439 Leave a comment! I want your opinion about it :)
AllieAngel6439 AllieAngel6439 Jan 24, 2011
@Angelina_np Thanks lots nd yea i love reading stories so will check it out :D
Angelina_np Angelina_np Jan 24, 2011
Uhm! Vampire and Werewolves in one! That's something girl. Keep writing, I want the rest of the story! :D 
                              So Voted!
                              
                              If you want read my story and vote. :)