Lost In Darkness

Lost In Darkness

1.2K Reads 50 Votes 5 Part Story
LipsOfDeceit By LipsOfDeceit Updated Aug 27, 2012

What happens when everyone you know turns up dead, all because somebody is after you? Where can you run when you aren't even sure who and what you're running from.

Jessica Willows has only herself to trust when her family and friends are killed. Can she discover the killer before he discovers her?

LipsOfDeceit LipsOfDeceit May 17, 2012
@simplypaige Yeah, I do it all through phone mostly so more difficult >_< but thank you so much for your feedback :)
                              
                              @Goldbear102 Yeah, it goes into more detail further into the story (:
londonlira londonlira Apr 19, 2012
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_TuffPuppy _TuffPuppy Mar 08, 2012
LMAO love the ending "im getting too old fpr this" it was really descriptive and it was good paced! well done!
thefairytalegirl thefairytalegirl Mar 08, 2012
I've never read mysteries before so I have nothing to compare this with but from what I've read I can say that you're a really good writer. Perfect grammar, with just the right amount of imagery to satisfy us yet leave us curious. And it's just your first story! Keep it up!
LipsOfDeceit LipsOfDeceit Mar 08, 2012
@strawberrycrayon Haha, I didn't even realise there was huge spaces! But thank you :)
strawberrycrayon strawberrycrayon Mar 08, 2012
The huge spaces in between paragraphs is a bit off-setting, but that's not a big deal at all. Other than that, this was great! Very creepy and suspenseful.