The powerfull sisters

The powerfull sisters

917 Reads 28 Votes 4 Part Story
lj By lj-allstar20 Updated Mar 22, 2011

The Powerfull sisters is about four girls who are quadruplets and each tell some of the story called their lifes! ( Which means that the point of veiw changes ever chapter, from girl to girl) They all have nevver lived a normal life and being hunted done by evil sciencetests and having powers dosnt make thier lives any easier. oh and the four girls are splet into two. two girls live together  in rhode island and two girls live together  in maine.  both sets dont know that the  other  set existes!

    xOrdinary_floweRx xOrdinary_floweRx Aug 18, 2011
    I've been witing for soo long, when r u gonna finish the story?? it's gr8!!! (great):)
    shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Mar 08, 2011
    Sky is like Storm lol. Storm is my favorite X-men member of all time. The story is really interesting and love it so far.
    chaterboxxx chaterboxxx Jan 26, 2011
    This is very intersting. The stroyline is something new I havent read yet. I do agree with Happinessforeva that don't reveal too much or the sotry will be begin to drag and then the story becomes predictable. But othere than that the imagery is good and descriptions. I like it alot. got my vote
    abbiii abbiii Jan 25, 2011
    this is a really good start, some minor mistakes bur apart from that it was great! 
                                  only one thing that I would change though, is to shorten the paragraphs.
                                  great effort! :)
    Purerose Purerose Jan 24, 2011
    Interesting idea. There's something a bit funny going on in your formatting and there are a few times where names have been left uncapitalised. Good start though. :)