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Diary of an ugly kid..

Diary of an ugly kid..

1K Reads 15 Votes 5 Part Story
Hannah Hiney By SmartiePartie Updated Apr 14, 2011

Earth was left 10 years ago. Elle is an orphan, an ugly kid in a beautiful kids world. Then, Daniel appears, revealing all secrets, and wreaking havoc. Will Elle join him, her love and lust take over, or will she stop him?

Star_catcher37 Star_catcher37 Apr 14, 2011
 Same opinion as @Karsyn.
                              The first one was better. But I like the conflict between Starlie and Elle. LOVE THEIR NAMES!!!!!
                               And you spelled teacher as tacher. 
Karsyn Karsyn Jan 24, 2011
Again, really good, but this chapter lost the spark the first chapter had. What happened between the chapters? It left a big hole in it, a whole bunch of background info, that I think you should spend some time filling. But still a great job! XD Let me know when you update, okay?