Seven Thunders

Seven Thunders

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Tony Laplume By TonyLaplume Completed

A war between worlds, a war between brothers...Years ago the Danab came to Earth seeking to reclaim it.  Humanity resisted, but the conflict didn't end, it only escalated.  One family became torn apart by it.  This is their story.

BellaBelk BellaBelk Mar 10
Did you ever watch the SyFy show Defiance? The main character is called Nolan, so I find the name interesting to show up here.
grierks grierks Feb 01
This paragraph definitely has some impact, but also confuses me. I do not need to know that New Earth was the first name and Danab was something it had later because that interrupts the flow of the prose. Also is Danab a planet or a species? Because if its both that's gonna be confusing.
BellaBelk BellaBelk Mar 03
I rather like this paragraph, the way it's written like the character claimed ownership of it. Kind of reminds me of The Hobbit (which is among my top five books, so that is a major compliment).