Watched

Watched

16.7K Reads 584 Votes 24 Part Story
bluefireandphoenix By bluefireandphoenix Updated May 04, 2013

Ever had that feeling when you're being watched? Well this is a time when women aged 18-20 aren't safe, and are being watched. Being watched to determine if they should be chosen.

  • alien
  • aliens
  • armor
  • bay
  • captain
  • capture
  • cass
  • colony
  • corillians
  • guards
  • injury
  • jade
  • jaetel
  • jarek
  • jett
  • kiss
  • medical
  • pandora
  • peaceful
  • plans
  • sciencefiction
  • sleep
  • space
  • tallik
  • teral
  • volddin
  • zane
WindyWinter WindyWinter Aug 10, 2017
Have you ever had the feeling that you were being watched?
                              
                              And that the person watching you was a... 
                              A giant elephant in the sky.
                              
                              I think I'm gonna have to say no. Do you? Have that feeling?
bluefireandphoenix bluefireandphoenix Nov 19, 2014
Thank you guys for your editing, it's been awhile since I've looked over this one, so I definitely know it needs work. I'm glad you like the story so far!
ansleybee123 ansleybee123 Nov 17, 2014
Great, but you know you don't need separate quotations for each sentence. It gets confusing after a while because I keep thinking the speakers switches. Story seems really great and I can't wait to see where you take it.
bluefireandphoenix bluefireandphoenix Feb 26, 2012
It's actually 32 pages, but wattpad uses different size stuff than word
bluefireandphoenix bluefireandphoenix Feb 10, 2012
I can only write SO FAST, CHILL! However, tomorrow, or late at night when no ones watching, and by the way, send me ideas for songs, I listen to songs when I write.
bluefireandphoenix bluefireandphoenix Feb 10, 2012
Thanks you guys! And by the way, I do try to add a chapter everyday, even with Mr. Rockne shoving homework down my face!