Perfect Circle

Perfect Circle

435 Reads 13 Votes 3 Part Story
Purerose By Purerose Updated Jan 27, 2011

Liv's doing her best to move on with her life after being abducted by serial killer, Kerr Miller. Unfortunately Kerr Miller isn't quite finished with her...

Angel_Eyes24 Angel_Eyes24 Jan 27, 2011
Aw man I got kind coufused for a moment with the dialouge and the flashback part, but I figured it out XD it's a good story so far, but it was like six pages! I was like: "oh man this is long!" but if I could read a 300 page book in like four days then I can read these little six pages!
JusLuvLyf JusLuvLyf Jan 26, 2011
There are a few grammar errors but other than that I agree you describe really well. however, i couldn't really get into it because it's taking so long just to go to the next phase of the story. 
DaniiRawwr DaniiRawwr Jan 25, 2011
Your writing is almost perfect I don't see any mistakes. However, I couldn’t get in to it, maybe it’s just not my type of story but there wasn’t anything to get me hooked. I would’ve like to have seen more dialogue or action other than background. But overall it’s a great first chapter. :)
LittleDhampir18 LittleDhampir18 Jan 25, 2011
WOW! I really honestly can't find any mistakes! no lie, maybe a couple grammar errors but I didn't even notice because I was so drawn into this story! keep up the good work (: all I can say is you're an amazing writer! Congrats! (:
tianajade tianajade Jan 24, 2011
I agree with the comments bellow; a very powerful read. It drew me in straight away, maybe dragged on for longer than needed though. I found no grammar or spelling errors, which is great! :') It's a really good start, and the story idea is a great one! *Voted*.