Another Time

Another Time

460 Reads 15 Votes 1 Part Story
SmileyEileen By SmileyEileen Completed

Rosie Cavendish is a London girl born and bred. She loves the safe grey pavements of the city and finds herself breaking out in hives while watching nature documentaries. Imagine her utter disgust when she is forced to move to the hills of Scotland to attend Glen Shira a boarding school for young ladies. All because of her grandmother....that selfish, stubborn old cow. 
Hope you enjoy this one I loved writing it. It's super funny (well, I think it is).

SmileyEileen SmileyEileen Feb 03, 2011
@elevatormusic 
                              I can definitely identify with that lol! 
                              Glad you like it. I'm going to read some of yours now :]
vantablack vantablack Feb 03, 2011
I'm a suburban girl myself, and I...that would be torture. You don't take my freaking iPod away from me, it's my baby!
                              *cries loudly*
DaniiRawwr DaniiRawwr Jan 24, 2011
I like what you've written so far, you have a great talent with your word choices but like @prettygiirlj  said try spacing out where they talk and I would put Quotation marks instead of single because some people could confuse them as commas. Other than that good job, and happy writing. :) 
IBreakHearts IBreakHearts Jan 24, 2011
i like it but when they are talking can you space it out? nothing else then that  voted :D
SmileyEileen SmileyEileen Jan 23, 2011
Enjoy =]
                              And please please drop me a comment! I'd seriously love to get one. I don't mind if it's positive or negative I'd just really love some feedback. Thanks xxx