NEW: Introducing Tap. Addictive chat stories for your 📲 Now in 10 languages
The Undesired

The Undesired

138K Reads 5K Votes 26 Part Story
Reapers Lady By VirginiaKenney Completed

My name is Skyler and this is my story.  I'm a werewolf, my pack hates me, the alpha has made me his slave and punching bag. He refuses to let me leave, but I'm becoming desperate. The more 'his face' appears to me as the alpha punishes me the more determined I am to escape. Who is he, and why has he started talking to me?                                       Warning this is a boyxboy. Don't read if love offends you! This is my first story I have posted so I would love some feedback, votes and maybe some fans guys! :D

Forsaken_Angels Forsaken_Angels Dec 01, 2013
This is really good so far. I really feel sad for the main guy. What a jerk alpha!
DiDi_XD DiDi_XD Nov 15, 2013
Whoa... PLOT TWIST!! lol.. But it's good so far and like you've mentioned, there's only a bunch of spelling and grammar mistakes around.. Nothing too drastic or out of reach from being rectified.. :)
- - Nov 09, 2013
I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is really amazing.
- - Nov 09, 2013
It´s really interesting start. I can´t wait to read next chapter. Also good job :)
helpless_dinosaur helpless_dinosaur Nov 08, 2013
Very interesting start the story hope to see more and don't feel discourage if you don't get many readers or votes because that's what happen to me  the first time I was on here...also good luck!
VirginiaKenney VirginiaKenney Nov 08, 2013
@XxBeastModexX thank you so much for reading and commenting. Yes it is going to be a boyxboy. My first one I have ever written so I hope I don't mess it up, lol.