read this short poem and find out what i think is the most precious of them all...
@SJWist i did want the reader to keep wandering ;-] glad it made some sense in the end..yes, a lot tend to think it's on love..
thank you again for your kind words .. i'l continue to read your work .. k.i.t. and good luck ! xxxxxxxxx
=O not bad at all for a first poem. I'm like the critic that guesses the rest of the movie from having seen only the first scene, so before about half I was leaning towards it being 'love', but the 3rd stanza threw my guess off and left me guessing till it was revealed in the end. ^ ^
@SJWist <3 thank you..this is like my very first so called poem thing :p
just asking.. while you were half way reading this, did you know what the poem was about ?
and thanks a bunch for fanning me .. it means so much xxxxxxx
"Time leads to it, time holds it
Time makes it grow, time makes it fade"
I adore these lines <3
@arwinPra :D and hey! I'm still waiting for that story of yours!!! :P
@Angelina_np sure thing gal.. and of course i liked it a loot :D