THE PRECIOUS

THE PRECIOUS

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arwin-Pra By arwinPra Updated Jan 23, 2011

read this short poem and find out what i think is the most precious of them all...

arwinPra arwinPra Feb 18, 2011
@SJWist i did want the reader to keep wandering ;-] glad it made some sense in the end..yes, a lot tend to think it's on love.. 
                              thank you again for your kind words .. i'l continue to read your work .. k.i.t. and good luck ! xxxxxxxxx
SJWist SJWist Feb 18, 2011
=O  not bad at all for a first poem.  I'm like the critic that guesses the rest of the movie from having seen only the first scene, so before about half I was leaning towards it being 'love', but the 3rd stanza threw my guess off and left me guessing till it was revealed in the end.  ^ ^
arwinPra arwinPra Feb 18, 2011
@SJWist  <3 thank you..this is like my very first so called poem thing :p 
                              just asking.. while you were half way reading this, did you know what the poem was about ?
                              
                              and thanks a bunch for fanning me .. it means so much xxxxxxx
SJWist SJWist Feb 18, 2011
"Time leads to it, time holds it
                              Time makes it grow, time makes it fade"
                              
                              I adore these lines  <3 
Angelina_np Angelina_np Feb 09, 2011
@arwinPra :D and hey! I'm still waiting for that story of yours!!! :P
arwinPra arwinPra Feb 09, 2011
@Angelina_np sure thing gal.. and of course i liked it a loot :D