LOVECOHOLIC

LOVECOHOLIC

120 Reads 4 Votes 1 Part Story
arwin-Pra By arwinPra Updated Jan 23, 2011

i believe anyone who experienced a break-up will rhyme with this short poem

arwinPra arwinPra Jan 28, 2011
@Angelina_np haha .. yup, that would be a good way to express.. ahh for next time ^_^ xoxoxoxo
Angelina_np Angelina_np Jan 28, 2011
@arwinPra Uh huh! I see! So, I'd like it much more if you'd written it in a dialog-thing way! You know, like the boy and the girl talking at the beginning, and they'd be happy and lovely and all those things, and by the ending the boy's answers would become sharp and rough etc.. Think about it :D
arwinPra arwinPra Jan 28, 2011
@Angelina_np haha i know.. it's about 'high on first love-screw it in the end' thing.. me and my chum wrote this together.. so i blame the negativity on him :P
                              
                              thanks again for commenting ^_^
Angelina_np Angelina_np Jan 28, 2011
It's cute, but a bit depressed at the ending.. why? Think positive:P
                              I like it and yay! first comment! hehe!