i believe anyone who experienced a break-up will rhyme with this short poem
@Angelina_np haha .. yup, that would be a good way to express.. ahh for next time ^_^ xoxoxoxo
@arwinPra Uh huh! I see! So, I'd like it much more if you'd written it in a dialog-thing way! You know, like the boy and the girl talking at the beginning, and they'd be happy and lovely and all those things, and by the ending the boy's answers would become sharp and rough etc.. Think about it :D
@Angelina_np haha i know.. it's about 'high on first love-screw it in the end' thing.. me and my chum wrote this together.. so i blame the negativity on him :P
thanks again for commenting ^_^
It's cute, but a bit depressed at the ending.. why? Think positive:P
I like it and yay! first comment! hehe!