That Special Some One.

That Special Some One.

1.8K Reads 32 Votes 9 Part Story
chels1011 By chels1011 Completed

Melissa, moves from big town too little with her aunt. Her moms in the hospital & can no longer take care of her, She runs into her bestfriend Tim & realizes that she's madly in love with him. They spend everyday together, when her mom gets sicker can he be that special some one?
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Viktoria2009 Viktoria2009 Feb 05, 2011
I don't usually like short stories but this was good. I think it could be a really great story if you wanted/ had the time to make it longer with more details. 
chels1011 chels1011 Feb 01, 2011
@twilightgurl2 thanks and i know. I'm not really good with that stufffff.
twilightgurl2 twilightgurl2 Feb 01, 2011
Good. There is some grammatical errors, actually there's a lot of them, but the overall concept is really good. :)
chels1011 chels1011 Jan 23, 2011
@imsuperweird will do:) 
                              please read mine? just finished the second part<3