Rebirth  (Twilight Saga - Pregnant with the next generation)

Rebirth (Twilight Saga - Pregnant with the next generation)

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TheLadyHoll By TheLadyHoll Completed

The Cullen females become pregnant under the 'Ubertas Luna" (The Fertile Moon): a rare event that only occurs when a vampire with fertility powers is born under a crescent moon, the same shape a vampire bite leaves on its victim. There is no precedence for such a birth, or child. How will the Cullens escape the scrutiny of the Volturi - and will they survive this unprecedented wholly vampiric gestation?

She is literally putting Pov's then still narrative the story in the third person's pov.
I didn't fully understand what was going on until I read the comments XD
Im_the_otaku Im_the_otaku Nov 16, 2016
I get so confused, the placement of the quotations makes it hard to understand when they go to speak or have a thought. Make that easier to pinpoint please.
-Psychotic-Slut- -Psychotic-Slut- Dec 19, 2016
Could you maybe put quotations around the ones who are speaking? It's kind of difficult to read when its all jumbled up.
kinahloves kinahloves Sep 19, 2016
I actually loked the storie. You're very good at describing images
TinaHerold TinaHerold Nov 02, 2016
I like it but I would I like to see Bella be having a baby too