Chloe is 14- she has done things she has many regrets on. So while she runs away she has some big problems before she can get to her destination. Germany.
@lisozeme I asked someone to comment? Oh. I don't even remember. Oh well,
Okay...what is it that makes the leader the leader? Think about that...
Next, you need to split the big paragraph up, and don't just say, "She's thirteen. She got pregnant then...da da da da da." I dunno, it didn't tickle my fancy.
I actully really like that idea. I will see. I hate Chole so much so I might. :)
@Nobody-can-hurt-me @Piggy7234 Hey guys! Thats really good. I can't now but I prmise to think about it. :)
Maybe megan falls in love with David and gets pregnant with his child
I like how she is a bad girl and I like how you give many difrent sees. I mean you can hear Choles story and then the parents and then the others. :)