kidnapped and Raped

kidnapped and Raped

76.3K Reads 1K Votes 15 Part Story
Mica By mica2342 Updated Jan 02

Janae walker was just and ordinary 21 year. She has a boyfriend that loves her, lost her job,and her father has currently pasted away(so  they think). To make matters worse the is raped and kidnapped by the mysterious gang leader named Ivan.

HayleyWard5 HayleyWard5 Jul 14
These people are messed up first the detective then her boyfriend it wasn't her fault
That 15 minutes she was hiding she could have called the cops just saying
gmwber720 gmwber720 Jan 25
I love this a lot but u should reread it before you pot it this story has so many misspelled words
nevaehhern nevaehhern Jan 06
It's really good but I think you need to add more description of what happened and how it happened. I don't want you to take this the wrong way.
AmyaBoo100 AmyaBoo100 Jan 02
I thank that so far it is wonderful but it needs more details and I thank they should kill jake because he is a jerk he should save her or try to fight but on the next part I thank jake has been keeping a secrete that he had something to do when she got kidnapped
rose-yasma rose-yasma Dec 25, 2015
Your book has a nice story line so far but I feel like you running to fast without explaining what is happening in depth like more description in the rape scene for example like how she felt and things like that