Janae walker was just and ordinary 21 year. She has a boyfriend that loves her, lost her job,and her father has currently pasted away(so they think). To make matters worse the is raped and kidnapped by the mysterious gang leader named Ivan.
God forbid but if i was her, I woulda transition from a victim to a murderer cause my hand would ve been around his neck
These people are messed up first the detective then her boyfriend it wasn't her fault
That 15 minutes she was hiding she could have called the cops just saying
I love this a lot but u should reread it before you pot it this story has so many misspelled words
It's really good but I think you need to add more description of what happened and how it happened. I don't want you to take this the wrong way.
I thank that so far it is wonderful but it needs more details and I thank they should kill jake because he is a jerk he should save her or try to fight but on the next part I thank jake has been keeping a secrete that he had something to do when she got kidnapped