You've Got That One Thing

You've Got That One Thing

9 Part Story 4K Reads 52 Votes
Paola Garcia By Pao_Direction Completed

Just a regular girl from Arizona goes on a hike one day and little did she know that she would find THE guy with that one thing she was looking for. She also never would have imagine that he, Zayn Malik would feel the same exact way for her.  And in the process of their relationship she becomes very close friends with his mates, Louis, Liam, Harry and Niall. Will this love story last, is this the real thing? <3

spraythesun spraythesun Feb 17, 2012 05:30PM
Yeah, you should write it like that :) 
                                    
                                    BUT! Otherwise, very good!!! :D
MissHoranette MissHoranette Feb 16, 2012 05:37PM
@Pao_Malik Like this: 
                                    
                                    Liam: Hiya
                                    Zayn: Hey. 
                                    
                                    I write like this.
                                    
                                    'Hiya,' said Liam, happily.
                                    'Hey,' Zayn replied, his voice monotone.
Pao_Direction Pao_Direction Feb 16, 2012 05:17PM
thanks @MissHoranette i wasn't aware that my description was missing :) x and what do you mean by "script form"?
MissHoranette MissHoranette Feb 15, 2012 04:57PM
Heya! I think it's an awesome story so far, may I offer some critical feedback? If you want to get your story read, I suggest pitting a description and I just feel, a lot of people don't like reading in script form. That's just my opinion :) it's still awesome :)