Torn Between Two Guys...[writers block so its on hold]

Torn Between Two Guys...[writers block so its on hold]

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Ramanii Drew Simpson By ramanii1000 Updated Apr 29, 2011

2 guys...1 girl. Jasmine a small town girl who's life is anything but perfect. But soon her life takes many turns and at one turn she meets schools player Luke Smith and on the other end she meet pale , unknown new kid Avan...but soon she relizes she love them both but...she has to choose only onw of them...The one she chooses lives....the other dies....who does Jasmine choose?

ramanii1000 ramanii1000 May 14, 2011
@nightfall_fairy thanks :) actually this book was suppose to be a short story for my english but i turned it into a book :P but thank you for commenting and reading :D
xRadioRebelx xRadioRebelx May 08, 2011
Lovin' it! You have many grammatical errors, but hey, we've all got those.(; Either way, I really enjoyed reading this & it sure kept me entertained.(:
                              
                              
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ramanii1000 ramanii1000 May 03, 2011
@teamedward14 lol ;) and if it was i want jacob to be my bf ;)
ramanii1000 ramanii1000 Apr 29, 2011
@Smileys loll i try buhhh english can get boring sometimes :P ;) @BrownxEyedxBrunettex LOL thx and I KNW ;) heheh i tohught i might as well choose them now then later :P
Smileys Smileys Apr 29, 2011
haha when i first started reading i saw that mine also started with a dream!
                              Its a good start bt try work on your grammar, pay attention in english ;) hehe
ramanii1000 ramanii1000 Mar 09, 2011
@DamnedforEternity  thx and yee the editing isnt too great but im working on it :D