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Pen Your Pride
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2K Reads 769 Votes 11 Part Story
Wilt By willtran42 Updated Apr 04, 2017

After Ben's sister surrenders to her illness, he finds his priorities shifting as he thinks of ways to close his final days with his sister.

***New chapters posted Tuesdays.***

  • 2017
  • cry
  • death
  • engaged
  • family
  • fiance
  • fiction
  • general
  • heart
  • life
  • longdistance
  • love
  • mourn
  • mourning
  • priorities
  • romance
  • sad
  • siblings
  • tears
  • wattys2017
adamaelovelace adamaelovelace Feb 04, 2017
Maybe start a new sentence instead of using the conjunction "but" 
                              "I was just tired of waiting. I know"
clockfroth clockfroth Feb 04, 2017
This took a while to get me interested, but the part about hospice caught my attention. The rest of the letter was too vague to really grab me, but it makes sense that it is the way it is because both people know exactly what they are talking about.
elfordalley elfordalley Feb 07, 2017
You do a great of injecting realism in the hospital scenes. We've all had to watch family suffer in these situations, it's something that will really resonate.
- - Feb 23, 2017
I am so sorry that I am only just getting to this, but I sure am excited!
annelisewong- annelisewong- Feb 12, 2017
I really loved the description! Right away I could tell it would be a compassionate story full of love, but at the same time sad and captivating.
AZLakin AZLakin Feb 03, 2017
Very nice!! I like the way you placed a message on your prologue it draws the reader's attention real well!!