The Sad Man. A Dani Lancing Story

The Sad Man. A Dani Lancing Story

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P. D. Viner By PDViner Completed

Police officer Tom Bevans is nicknamed the Sad Man by his colleagues. As a Family Liaison Officer he is always the bearer of bad news - it is his job to tell the friends and family of victims the fate of their loved ones.

But Tom is weighted down by crimes both old and new - haunted by the death of his best friend Dani, whose murder has never been solved.

When a rare opportunity emerges for Tom to take the lead in a horrific murder investigation, he is determined to get justice for the victim. A young girl has been found in her own home, cut so badly - and so carefully - that she has bled to death, leaving a deliberate pool of blood in the shape of angel wings....

I really like the descriptions, it is very intriguing and has me hooked! :)
If you've ever read a real book like this one, you would know that the writer doesn't write to please you . The it's very evident who's speaking on each line so taking your drama somewhere else because this is amazing! @ the comments above ^^^
Booking_Out Booking_Out Jun 28
So glad he thinks they should get the killer. And the killer is an idiot. For killing young girls,like Chelsea...
tfelg01 tfelg01 Feb 12
This is not a well schooled family. Some people do speak that way.
Daneeion Daneeion Oct 18
This paragraph is beautiful, how each sentences flows together and creates sound.
tfelg01 tfelg01 Feb 12
Excellent start! You can feel his pain. Love Dani talking to him.