Stuck in time

Stuck in time

422 Reads 15 Votes 1 Part Story
Alexis Worthing By EllieTyler562 Updated Jan 22, 2011

When Willow is pushed to the ground by a boy in a shop, her time travelling device is broken. She is now stuck in a unfamiliar time with no way of getting home. Will she be able to survive in this time with the help of her new found friends Katie and Timmy or will she be stuck in time forever?

Lmao o was looking up my own stuck in time story and came across this. Why no update
theallicat theallicat Jun 04, 2012
This was a very interesting beginning...you should upload more :)
                              There are some little error, mainly with the dialogue layout, but the contet of the story makes up for most of it ! This was super creative :)
ellabella201 ellabella201 Mar 14, 2012
oh yay  a future story :D i love how they have wristband to take them from place to place. i have a feeling this is going to be a really good story. there's not much to comment on except that it was really good, but had some errors (we're human it happens) its really good, hope you continue
WhisperingFantasies WhisperingFantasies Mar 02, 2012
lol reminds me of Sherlock! :P don't even know the person but randomly become their roommate! ^~^ and for the record, I love Sherlock!
IWearSneakers IWearSneakers Nov 24, 2011
Heeey!!!! Solve your grammar mistakes, add a bit more description and this could become a good read! I love the idea for the plot it sounds interesting... Different :) 
                              
                              Apart from that it's good :)
EllieTyler562 EllieTyler562 Nov 15, 2011
@AutumnR oh! Right! I didn't know what a period was! (I must have missed that lesson.....) OMG! That makes so much sense now!