A fantastic Children's short story about Vanessa's adventures through strange and far away worlds in order to help the Moon people get back their skills.
Cover by Intergrapher http://beculetzi.deviantart.com/gallery/
Nice job ! Great description, it provides a great mental picture for the reader.
@evanescencefan Thank you very much for reading and commenting :)
@rkrill thank you very much. i was a bit in doubt about the beginning myself and you really pinpointed the problem. i'll give it a re-write
@WhyteRhose Thank you very much for your comments. i really needed some outside input on my story. Will give it another read and try to spot the mistakes. i might email it to you afterwards to see what you think. Thank you for offering. :)
Your welcome and Im going and fanning you just in case you write more. I want yo be one of the first to know lol. Even if you write a different story with different characters I would read it. Your really creative and your writing is great.
That was awesome. If they have some kind of contest you can enter it into, you should. Are you going to write anymore stories with those characters? If you do I will definitely read it.