Shipwrecked (A short story.)

Shipwrecked (A short story.)

18.5K Reads 251 Votes 23 Part Story
Alexandra By Dramatique_Mushroom Completed

"Life is hard," says just about every teenager living an easy life, including Caroline. But when a boat journey goes terribly wrong, life is not just hard. 

Life is precious.

aRiyam aRiyam Jul 19, 2012
awsome!
                              Loved it, you inspired me for my own shipwrecked story
Lizzfizzwizz1 Lizzfizzwizz1 Oct 31, 2011
This chapter sorta seems like titanic cause the iceberg, swimming in freezing water... 
                              But it's still super good
Dramatique_Mushroom Dramatique_Mushroom Apr 29, 2011
@Kugelmonkey
                              Hey,
                              I editted chapter one, taking into consideration what you said.
                              
                              Please, if you have time, read once more through this chapter and tell me what you think!
                              
                              If you aren't able to, its fine :)
                              
                              <3 Drama xx 
nicollettenikki nicollettenikki Feb 26, 2011
This was filled with powerful and beautiful images. Your work displays a deep understanding of imagination. This was truly eloquent and had a depth. It was tremendously evocative and thrivingly thrilling! 
Dramatique_Mushroom Dramatique_Mushroom Apr 26, 2010
@lissacullenxo 
                              Yeah but if you read some of my other stuff, i have tried to fix that problem, but then i am using commas too much! I cant win! Hehe. And thanks, every little helps, so vote/comment/FAN and carry on being awesome!
                              Thanks.
                              From A
                              =D
silly-sophie silly-sophie Apr 26, 2010
I think you're using 'I' at the start of the sentence a bit too much, and its moving a bit too fast. but, hey, what do i know?
                              i think the plots really good, all in all, you're a good writer. keep up the good work (:
                              xoxo
                              sophie