My Unpredictable New Year's Eve ✔

My Unpredictable New Year's Eve ✔

1.4K Reads 304 Votes 5 Part Story
HungryPizza By rock_dreamer Completed

Seventeen-year-old Avalon planned her New Year's Eve up in detail. She has her whole outfit figured out and is ready to mingle her way into 2017 by attending her first real party yet.

But there is always a way for her plans to get ruined... In the most unpredictable way Ava has yet to see. 

⭐A holiday bonus short story ⭐

  • 2017starlightawards
  • agwa
  • cute
  • disaster
  • holiday
  • humour
  • newyearseve
  • party
  • resolutions
  • sftsawards
  • shortstory
  • sick
  • snippets
  • tbeawards
  • teen
  • the2017awards
  • thestardustawards
  • wattys2017
  • youngadult
Batpan12 Batpan12 Apr 29, 2017
I just got the notification now...Thanks Wattpad! I can always count on
NinaMarie13 NinaMarie13 Sep 16, 2017
I got here from the app "tap" lol. I couldn't finish the tap so I was like, "let's read it!"
megs328 megs328 May 05, 2017
                              I know I keep saying this, but I love how you write. Details that are a huge deal to the overall plot are catching my interest. Again, I love your characters and their interactions.
I think you meant "success", not "succes". Also this intro is good at capturing a readers attention. Giving details to a story making them want to keep reading to find out more.
Instead of saying "in each of my hands" you could say "in both of my hands" or "on in each hand". This is merely a suggestion. Also, I've only ever had my school's pre-made burgers, I hope those were better tasting xD
RenkoThao9 RenkoThao9 May 01, 2017
                              I really enjoy this a lot! It's relatable and it flows extremely well. There aren't any errors to point out. The way you pulled off the POV of a teenager was done heavily well which I liked so much.