The Man In The Water

The Man In The Water

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Shanihouston By niahouston Updated Jun 24

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She had never meant for it to go this far. They all had believed that it was just a town myth used to scare little children. But God had she been wrong! Looking below over the railing laid Micah Smith. His body was bloody and broken. His neck twisted backward, so his lifeless eyes stared back up at her. But the worst part was that not a minute later those eyes started to bleed black and blink up at her. Covering her lips to seal the scream that was threatening to burst out she closed her eyes and prayed that this was just a sick twisted dream. 
Slowly. Very slowly she opened her moist brown eyes and took a steady breath. Walking slowly back towards the rail. She needed to be sure he was dead. Peaking over she was surprised when she saw nothing. The spot where Micah laid was spotless. Like no one had been there. Shaking her head she whispered to herself 
" Nia get a grip you've just had too much to drink." 
Suddenly a cold stiff hand laid on her shoulder.
" Sorry dear but you're wrong, You're mine now" and then everything went black.
This story is about a town urban legend, who so happens to be real and who is obsessive and possessive of a girl named Nia. He's willing to kill anyone who gets in his way of what he considers his. 
Read to find out what happens.

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  • bwwm
  • deadly
  • fantasy
  • girl
  • hood
  • horror
  • justwrite
  • mature
  • obbsessive
  • possessive
  • romance
  • scary
  • supernatural
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starbtght starbtght Jun 16
rule number one: YOU NEVER SHAKE THAT FEELING OFF. WHEN YOU HAVE THAT SAME DREAM SIX TIMES. THATS TELLING YOU SOMETHING AND ITS SERIOUS!!!!!💢💢💢💢😨😧😦😰😱😱😱😱
planettoyin planettoyin May 19, 2017
the dress is not one of my favourites but the color is sooo beautiful
etteacher39 etteacher39 Oct 17, 2017
Wow, this is really  good  and very creative. .. ^^ FIGHTING ! !!
AlexisCharland AlexisCharland May 28, 2017
one thing i dont like is sometimes it says micah and micha like what one is it
MoKoMoKoMo MoKoMoKoMo Dec 26, 2017
Dude, this party is going to be how the dream, well nightmare comes true girl
MoKoMoKoMo MoKoMoKoMo Dec 26, 2017
This is some good writing.
                              Detailed to the T.
                              The nightmare is going to happen...