She's the world's most gorgeous slayer.
He's the world's most handsome prey.
When they clash, you can be sure of one thing: sparks will fly...vampire style.
(Complete & Edited. Please tell me if you find mistakes!)
It's Buffy grows up and becomes a model! Maybe... at least what I'm thinking so far! :D
This has been in my library forever! I don't know why I haven't read it yet - it's great!
At first I was like another vampire story.. flattering... but when you started with her being a model, that just added like a whole NEW dynamic to the story. I love your main character, she's enchanting and amazing. LOVE her personality. VOTED. You have amazing dialogue and characterization.
Use "hell of a" instead of "helluva". Great start. I can't wait to see the connection between "Dimitri" and her :)
THis isn't my type of story but I will say but you have TONS of potential to where youre going to be a big hit! :)
This is a really' good start I like how you began to ask questions and then carried it on' as if it was normal and the storylines different as well good start: i'm voting(;'