You're Right, I Could Never Do This Alone

You're Right, I Could Never Do This Alone

347 Reads 11 Votes 4 Part Story
lostdiadem77 By lostdiadem77 Updated Feb 27, 2011

When Annabelle witnesses her brother being kidnapped in front of her and her friend's own eyes, there's nothing left to do than to go after him. Now, Annabelle and her best guy friend Shayde must venture out to find her brother before it's to late, despite the dangers. Will they succeed?

lostdiadem77 lostdiadem77 Feb 27, 2011
@chocolatebuttonsxoxo Thanks :) I might change the rating later on for abit of violence, but nothing that much. Thanks for the vote too :))
chocolatebuttonsxoxo chocolatebuttonsxoxo Feb 26, 2011
i love the whole idea. i mean it's nice to have a (G) rated story with  a good plot. you don't see many of them and i myself am guilty of that :) you've got my vote. 
                              
                              xx louise.
lostdiadem77 lostdiadem77 Feb 25, 2011
@CountryStrong Thanks! I thought that would be a good idea :)
                              
                               @WickedGleek96 Thanks too! I like the realistic-ness because then it seems more likely to happen in real life. :D
                              Later on it gets less realisitic though lol xD
CountryStrong CountryStrong Feb 25, 2011
Good first chapter, especially liked the beginning where she was dreaming :)
- - Feb 25, 2011
I liked this. Great job with your vocab. It seems realistic which is good. Keep it up. Will read more later.