If I Cheat Death

If I Cheat Death

665 Reads 20 Votes 2 Part Story
G. Anne By LookingBack Updated Jan 22, 2011

"You get to compact eighty years into six months.You can imagine what happens next."

iswearsnape iswearsnape May 31, 2012
I loved it! It's well written and enticing! Upload if you have time please.
captainlaserpants captainlaserpants Apr 21, 2012
I like it a lot. It's been done before but not overused, and your writing is awesome! I voted!
PaleIsTheNewTan PaleIsTheNewTan Apr 16, 2012
no no no no no no, this can't be all there is, you have to post more, right away.
RenaFlower77 RenaFlower77 Oct 06, 2011
Cool title. Your have a clean writing stile. There are some grammar mistakes but nothing major. Keep going and you have a vote
CristianMihai CristianMihai Oct 06, 2011
No matter how much time you have, it's never going to be enough.
                              
                              Anyway, nicely written, even though there could have been a little bit more empathy. Anyway, great story.
CristianMihai CristianMihai Oct 06, 2011
Nice writing so far.
                              
                              You have a clear, clean style of writing. There are no redundancies, your main character seems to be very down to earth kind of person.
                              
                              There are some grammar/spelling mistakes, but you can easily fix them.