There is a Road

There is a Road

188 Reads 11 Votes 1 Part Story
jespah By jespah Completed

They say there is a road.
Science fiction meets spirituality as an ending gives way to a new beginning, a journey with a very different destination.

CrailSpeaker CrailSpeaker Oct 29, 2016
I like it. One friendly note (please don't take it as being unfriendly or judgmental): Isn't the word 'had' a bit overworked? I do like your writing.
Fiajawhiteman Fiajawhiteman Aug 29, 2015
Wow. This is what I love about short stories. So brief but the word economy doesn't take away  from the characterisation.  Really loved the description of the grandmother.
mris85 mris85 Aug 11, 2015
Well written and I particularly like the narrators acceptance of death as a road we all must take one day, whether you chain smoke, drink like a fish, or follow your passion in artistry. We all live on the same earth and leave it at some point to seek a new path.
ranchergirl98 ranchergirl98 Jul 26, 2015
Wow! This is an awesome story, I really love the narrative. It leaves off making you think about where the road is going to take them.
MirielOfGisborne MirielOfGisborne Oct 31, 2013
Very sensitive and personal. I don't think you need to add or change anything. This is as honest and brave as anyone can hope to be in the face of THAT road.
seasofme seasofme Oct 29, 2013
intriguing. is there more or is it one of those modern things that have to make sense just so??