The Girl in Milan

The Girl in Milan

11.5K Reads 44 Votes 24 Part Story
Eloisa Marie Odiada By eloisaodiada Completed

Steph is a lost girl in Milan that was found by a young boy named Laurie. What adventures will they encounter while Steph forgets her past. Will she remember?

kittyheartscupcakes kittyheartscupcakes Jul 27, 2011
ok your story is really interesting but i was a little confused cause u seemed to jump from one thing to the next i think if u put in a little more detail things would flow a lot better. I hope that makes sense.  Good start *voted*