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Eternal Bloods

Eternal Bloods

2.6K Reads 23 Votes 11 Part Story
Monique Rosauro By MoniqueRosauro Updated May 11, 2011

When everything was messed up, you’ll do everything to fix it even though it comes to start again. Stella Hamilton can be described into one word: everything. Everyone at her school treats her Ms. Popular and Ms. Perfect. Except for one. The Student Union doesn’t approve of her, they shun her away. 
Then comes Mr. Gorgeous: William Margaux. Everyone at her school has their eyes on him except her. Becoming sworn enemies, Stella made sure to stay away from him. Life’s not fair sometimes so it became hard on her and boom! They were stuck with each other.
As days passed by, mysterious encounters started happening with her, mysterious letters found, mysterious changes within her and the mysterious personality of William Margaux sprang up. Can she solve all the mysterious happenings around her? Or would she just ignore it and expect the worst-case scenario?

MoniqueRosauro MoniqueRosauro Mar 16, 2011
Eternal Bloods will be released on October 29,2011. The first four chapters are released to tune up the readers. I will notify all readers if ever i will released it before the said release date. Thank you for supporting
                              -Monique Rosauro
MoniqueRosauro MoniqueRosauro Feb 11, 2011
@OMGILoveBooks thanks.... i'll release chapters every week... maybe i may delay for only 2 to 3 days uploading my story.. ^^
dustclears dustclears Feb 04, 2011
Very good writing! Great description, grammar and puncuation. This story sounds very interesting and I sure will be voting and commenting on every chapter.
MoniqueRosauro MoniqueRosauro Feb 03, 2011
sorry for the delay ..I had things to do yesterday so maybe chapter 4 will be uploaded later and that's for sure!! ^^
MommyMagic MommyMagic Feb 02, 2011
I'm still reading . . . but I'll be honest, you need to pick up the pace.  Keep in mind what Hitchcock said.  Writing is life . . . with all the dull parts taken out.  Okay, I'm paraphrasing, but you get the idea.  
paigemae23 paigemae23 Feb 02, 2011
I realy liked the first two lines 'everything is new. And that was nice.' sometimes it is the simplest of sentences that are the most effective and I thought that this was a good way to start. Xxxx