fear, pain, acceptance amd love bxbxb

fear, pain, acceptance amd love bxbxb

52.5K Reads 1.4K Votes 14 Part Story
prettywitness By prettywitness Updated Jul 22

                                               Max is a very shy and cute teenager he was only 14 when his parents died in the pack fire and he was the only one to survive for 3yrs he had been trying to look for a pack that would accept him and and love him for who he was and he wasnt looking for a mate any time soon he is to afraid to be rejected hes been hurt to many times he just wants to be accepted 

FlowersBite FlowersBite Jul 02
Wow all of those packs were total jerks, how can they bring themselves to reject a 14 year old and threaten to kill him!
You usually don't just go into depression for 'days' it's usually longer?
                              No hate but its like complete self hate and giving up and that usually lasts longer.
                              Again, no offense.
Very nice and nice choice of using the twins Marcos and Marcio
yheartsoandalovei yheartsoandalovei May 14, 2014
I like the concept and I am pretty much into anything threesome BL, but I think that your grammar could be like a lot better. No offense intended- I am not usually a grammar Nazi, but when I have to read a line twice because I didn't understand it the first time sort of bothers me- a little.