Ranger of Path

Ranger of Path

650 Reads 24 Votes 55 Part Story
Jorden Leonard By JordenLeonard Updated Dec 04, 2017

Logs of griffin shit fall from the sky and vampires hide under beds. Holy war has come again to the realms, and all must beware the hybrids of mortal and divine.
    
 Memories of a bitter mother and a recent act of betrayal have Ishkur in a panic to ignore heroism and embrace his adventuring band's fresh ruthlessness so he isn't orphaned again.

  • avatar
  • bulb
  • demigod
  • fantasy
  • ghoul
  • gremlin
  • griffin
  • host
  • ishkur
  • magic
  • mystic
  • ogre
  • orc
  • power
  • protector
  • ranger
  • vampire
- - Apr 29, 2017
You can't just make me comment on your book and then never review me :/
thiseffervescentlife thiseffervescentlife Feb 23, 2017
Haha I like this part. Typically though, I don't like the use of "..." in dialogue, maybe says "he pauses" instead. I think that creates a pause more effectively
abiran1995 abiran1995 Feb 13, 2017
can't or couldn't (not sure if the father is still in the picture)
abiran1995 abiran1995 Feb 13, 2017
second sentence sounds a bit funny. Maybe an 'a' before verdant forest 
                              or plural forest and remove the s in covers
- - Feb 07, 2017
This story is great, but I'm confused. The dialogue has gotten me all messed up, and it's hard for me to keep up. I think the present tense is throwing me off as well.
UnKn0wN_Merchant UnKn0wN_Merchant Jan 12, 2017
Your writing good and I appreciated it. However, I've read it twice to understand it thought.