When breathing was God's way of punishing

When breathing was God's way of punishing

1 Part Story 217 Reads 15 Votes
Fourthaxis By Fourthaxis Completed

A poem about self loathing and bittersweet realizations...

KiaViolette KiaViolette May 07, 2012 11:15PM
all i have to say is that your crazy and i love you for it!!!!
this is one is favorite! its so sad, but full of emotion! I love the title (:
Fourthaxis Fourthaxis May 05, 2012 05:04AM
@BigBlueEyes @Apathy18  She is. Thanks for understanding that.
IzG1997 IzG1997 May 04, 2012 08:21PM
Read that a few times, realised I was crying. It's absolutely brilliant. x
Fourthaxis Fourthaxis May 04, 2012 07:04AM
@xxNerdnproudxx @Goldbear102 Thanks guys! I kind of screw up the punctuation when I get too into it. Will try editing it soon. :P
xxNerdnproudxx xxNerdnproudxx May 03, 2012 08:22PM
Gosh that was deep. I feel... i cnt even put into words how i feell. Ur an amazing poet. Wow you just need to work on some punctuation.  Otherwise perfect