The Unwanted Proposal

The Unwanted Proposal

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Shade By SDShade Updated May 06

He pulled me as I felt his hands snake to my waist then suddenly like thunder he was already half knelt in front of me, there I knew what was about to happen but yet my body won't move to stop everything 

"Marry me" was the only thing I understood I was too dumbstruck to even process everything that was happening. I stared into his dark brown eyes hoping it could answer the thousands of questions running into my head right now then there is this something that made me nod and answer his question and there he stood pulled a ring from his pocket, slipped it in my finger and hugged me like there's no tomorrow, then there I realized this decision will change my life forever


Accepting a marriage proposal from a stranger is the least thing Veronica expected to happen in a week of unluckiness.


After getting fired from her job on a Friday the 13th, she thought the unfortunate events will end once the clock strikes 12, little that she knows, everything was just starting or maybe just getting worse.


Will her life get anymore complicated?

Amrak324 Amrak324 Aug 27
I think "If only I was as pretty as her" or "If only I could be as pretty as her" would work better here because "I am pretty as her" is a bit confusing.
Amrak324 Amrak324 Aug 27
Bet whoever that is, is somehow related to boss guy if he isn't boss guy himself
Amrak324 Amrak324 Aug 27
You switch tenses a bit(okay I sound like a bitch....but honestly I really like to help and I know I hate when my friends don't tell me about my slips.)
Amrak324 Amrak324 Aug 27
To go with girls(and guys and others)  who don't realize how frickin beautiful they are.
Amrak324 Amrak324 Aug 27
Your car didn't even touch her, she's not the one whose hurt.😂
Amrak324 Amrak324 Aug 27
No period, also don't be fooled stalkers can look just like that