@defaroe I do love a little wordplay, I must say! I'm glad you liked this. One of my favorites, personally.
This was beautiful :) It kinda makes me think of going through life and never questioning it, never sinking deeper to find out the greater joys and hardship one will go through. I freaking love the cover!!! Its so beautiful!!!!
OMG!!! I LOVE POEMS I'M A POET TOO U CAN CHECK MY POEMS OUT IF U LIKE. DAMN THIS POEM WAS GOOD=)
i enjoyed the rhythm, but also the imagery. definitely walked away with some provoked thoughts, (and i think that is the point, no?). nice work ;)
@TheOrangutan Thank you for reading this, sir. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
What a grand little poem and very nicely executed. The rhythm and pace of it is spot on and all the couplets rhyme and have correct syllables and so on. A nice theme too and the circular nature of it is great. Very nicely done sir, a good piece of work. Gav