A Story in Rhyme

A Story in Rhyme

7 Part Story 1.3K Reads 103 Votes
James Delaney Swinney By JamesDSwinney Updated Nov 30, 2012

My life it goes in cycles,
    
    Like flowers bloom and die,
    
    The sun and moon are rising,
    
    And never asking why
    
    The seasons come in circles,
    
    And meld into the same,
    
    Autumn leaves and winter snows,
    
    Then spring and summer came
    
    Sunrise comes and sheds some light
    
    Leaves moon and stars behind,
    
    Gives us light to see our faults,
    
    Then night it blankets minds
    
    All lives they go in cycles
    
    You're born and then you die,
    
    You have to make the best of it,
    
    As years keep rolling by.
    
    My life it goes in cycles,
    
    Like flowers bloom and die,
    
    The sun and moon are rising,
    
    And never asking why
    

JamesDSwinney JamesDSwinney Dec 06, 2012 11:01PM
@defaroe I do love a little wordplay, I must say! I'm glad you liked this. One of my favorites, personally.
This was beautiful :) It kinda makes me think of going through life and never questioning it, never sinking deeper to find out the greater joys and hardship one will go through. I freaking love the cover!!! Its so beautiful!!!!
SilentNiaAngel SilentNiaAngel Apr 22, 2012 12:12AM
OMG!!! I LOVE POEMS I'M A POET TOO U CAN CHECK MY POEMS OUT IF U LIKE. DAMN THIS POEM WAS GOOD=)
parishsp parishsp Apr 17, 2012 03:52AM
i enjoyed the rhythm, but also the imagery. definitely walked away with some provoked thoughts, (and i think that is the point, no?). nice work ;)
JamesDSwinney JamesDSwinney Mar 06, 2012 11:06PM
@TheOrangutan Thank you for reading this, sir. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Mar 06, 2012 08:16PM
What a grand little poem and very nicely executed. The rhythm and pace of it is spot on and all the couplets rhyme and have correct syllables and so on. A nice theme too and the circular nature of it is great. Very nicely done sir, a good piece of work. Gav