The Elemental Balance

The Elemental Balance

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xxKStyle101xx By xxKStyle101xx Updated Oct 09

Every two hundred years, since the beginning when Earth finally evolved into a planet of life in our universe, there was a selected few who were granted the responsibility of wielding the remarkable power of the four famously known elements.

Fire: Element of Determination and Strong Will.
Earth: Element of Logic and Realism.
Air: Element of Intellect and Freedom.
Water: Element of Emotion and Compassion.

In addition to the four main elements were two more rarer ones: Light and Darkness. Light being the element of the Day and its purity whereas Darkness is deemed as the element of Night and its wickedness.

These types of dominating abilities would be utilized to keep are glorious world in balance so destruction wouldn't occur, with the council being the manipulator's starry guide.

Unfortunately, in the previous generation the council became aware the one who possessed the power of darkness power was increasing, making the world become unbalanced. They needed to kill her. But she ran away, growing vicious, living only in her desire for vengeance, swearing to kill the elements. 

However, her plans were delayed due to a light barrier and passage of time, thus she had to wait for the next generation.

Unexpectedly, they were teenagers.
(Full summary is in the first chapter).

So will they be able to learn to work together and train fast enough to fight off the dangerous entity that swears to murder them? Will they be able to forget about their past personal lives for the protection of themselves and the that of the Earth?

All answers will be found within the story right before your eyes. 

As you indulge within the story (that is if you do) please vote and comment, for it will be immensely appreciated and valued by me. I enjoy to hear the opinions, thoughts, theories or whatever in my stories, plus it's merely a nice thing to do. Also constructive criticism is actually welcomed.

(Ps: Story under editing. But don't let this deter you from reading).


  • adventure
  • air
  • darkness
  • death
  • dimensions
  • earth
  • elemental
  • elements
  • familiars
  • fantasy
  • fire
  • friendship
  • humor
  • light
  • magic
  • pain
  • powers
  • suicide
  • water
  • wattys2017
MadAngus MadAngus Oct 03
I really like the cover. Of this chapter, and the book itself.
Several grammatical mistakes that can be easily corrected like; run-on sentences, punctuation, and sentence headers. I love the premise, and believe there’s plenty of potential to be a very great book. I’d love to read it.
This is great! I have been readinf this thing for 3 hous and i'm just a 12 year old boy this interesting BTW i'm from philipines some of your grammars are wrong so you'll have to change it ok?☺
They should have just trained the other elements. This creates an even larger unbalance, with no darkness at all.
Nice, you used the symbols of Wicca for you cover. I like this book already.
ZoeMi0909 ZoeMi0909 Oct 06
So that explains our odd weather patterns. THE ELEMENTS ARE GOING THROUGH SOME PERSONAL ISSUES