Modern Day Lovers

Modern Day Lovers

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DreamingInReality By DreamingInReality Completed

Two Hearts, Twined together, One life, One death

    ToonMe ToonMe Jan 28, 2012
    Hey! great one! I never expect that kind. Uhm. Amazing! maybe you could just fit together the group of lines. The spaces really kinda annoying. Oh well, that's my opinion. Hope you read my poem as well. Thanks. http://www.wattpad.com/3253693-everything-under-the-sun-1-physics%27-romantic-side