Modern Day Lovers

Modern Day Lovers

1 Part Story 27 Reads 1 Vote
DreamingInReality By DreamingInReality Completed

Two Hearts, Twined together, One life, One death

ToonMe ToonMe Jan 28, 2012 05:31AM
Hey! great one! I never expect that kind. Uhm. Amazing! maybe you could just fit together the group of lines. The spaces really kinda annoying. Oh well, that's my opinion. Hope you read my poem as well. Thanks. http://www.wattpad.com/3253693-everything-under-the-sun-1-physics%27-romantic-side