Diary of a Biatch

Diary of a Biatch

15.6K Reads 175 Votes 24 Part Story
Shann:) By XxShazzyyxX Completed

First book in the series.

After the devastating death of her beloved, amazing father at the age of 4, Kaila's life changes forever. She used to be an amazing ectastic little girl, but now she's full of hate and bitchiness. The worst part is that she doesn't even know how or why her father died. Will she ever be happy again?

OhMyLoki OhMyLoki Feb 16, 2013
Ok it's alright but really doubt they a four year old would use a word like 'severely'. Other than that the book starts off great!
conyramirez conyramirez Dec 04, 2011
I like this so far! I've still got a lot more to read.
                              I couldn't help but notice you chose Thomas Fiss for a character. I love that guy. :)
Rachybab3 Rachybab3 Aug 07, 2011
This was a cute little chapter. I like how it starts off very light hearted.
percussionluvr percussionluvr Jul 16, 2011
Good begginning I think that you should try adding more detail. Use the five senses of your characters to show us your story! Drag us in make us feel like we're living the story rather than reading it.
supernatural-lover supernatural-lover Jul 09, 2011
wow this is amazing just saw it in the club chat and thought ill check it out but this is something in going to keep reading....love it :) so voing 
bfc3220 bfc3220 Jul 09, 2011
Like it so far...:-)  And its nice to know someone else calls it spag bol.......lol