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Rachel By live_laugh_love96 Updated Feb 02, 2011

“Ada don’t!” I hear Evelyn yell at me as I send my most powerful element, spirit, at Gage.  At the same moment, something inside me… shattered.  My soul, my entire being, feels as if it’s being ripped away from my body.  I cry out in pain before slumping against the railing.  I feel air rushing towards me as I plummet down towards the churning sea below me before everything turns black and the pain lessens.  My soul has just been shattered.

live_laugh_love96 live_laugh_love96 Jan 22, 2011
Okay guys, just to tell you, her name is pronounced a-(DAY)-a not ad-a or a-da :)  
live_laugh_love96 live_laugh_love96 Jan 21, 2011
@MaybalineLuna haha :)  Thanks!!!  Thanks for reading and everything!!!  :)