The Wings Series: My Beginning (on hold)

The Wings Series: My Beginning (on hold)

11.7K Reads 186 Votes 14 Part Story
Kay maxmillion By kay_milly Updated Jun 05, 2011

Zariah Rose life is about to change and she can't do nothing to stop it. She grew up thinking that she was a normal teenage girl but she's far from normal. She has special abilities and is way more powerful than any of her secret species. She is forcefully leaving her old life and starting her new one. In this new life is a new world. She battles things she never would have had to dealt with in her old life: Forbiden love, monster that wants her from there selves and the role she must take. This is her beginning and she doesn't take too well to it.

potatoesareboss potatoesareboss Nov 26, 2015
The title and this sentence @Lilly776
                              
                              They didn't specify WHAT type of wings
                              
                              For all we know, it could be a plate of...
StepAwayFromMyElbows StepAwayFromMyElbows Aug 11, 2012
There was a lot of emotion in that chapter and especially those parts like when she finds out her mother has died were written in a way that you could understand her pain. Only thing is there were a few grammar errors so nothing a little editting can't fix :D Good Job btw!
CatScratchxx CatScratchxx Nov 08, 2011
I love this! I started to read it and instantly was being pulled into the story! I fell in love with it, so I think I am going to read the rest tomorrow(: Really nice job
amysousa amysousa Nov 08, 2011
This is so good! The emotion made me feel like I was there watching it all :O
tracydee18 tracydee18 Oct 27, 2011
i really enjoyed it. it sets the stage for your plot beautifully. Would like some moredescriptions of your charcters but im sure thats coming up in the next chapter. also you have that one HUGE paragraph that needs to be broken up, but thats about it :)
                              
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yme123 yme123 Oct 27, 2011
The emotion in this story are amazing. This was a really good read, no spelling errors that I could see and I loved your start.