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Between the Lines

Between the Lines

13.4K Reads 165 Votes 12 Part Story
Amanda By AmandaPate Completed

This is a collection of poems by yours truly. Poems of love, music, war, betrayal, nature, and the art of writing.

mysogynoir mysogynoir May 06, 2013
This is amazing! I love the symbolism, the tone of voice. I didn't find a flaw.
darius_mclain darius_mclain Dec 30, 2012
Wow. This is one of the best best best poems I have ever read on this site. Ever. Gosh you really have a way with your words. This is just amazing.
knightwriter knightwriter Jun 06, 2012
I love your play on words in this poem, how you have personified paper and ink, describing the relationship between the two as lovers.  The choice of words is so effective for describing both the art of writing and the art of loving. well -written.  ~)K
JPKent JPKent Jan 05, 2012
@AmandaPate No problem, I've been waiting to read more of your work. Did you make a lot of improvements?
AmandaPate AmandaPate Jan 05, 2012
@robe9425 Thank you very much!!! That's such high praise! :)
JPKent JPKent Jan 05, 2012
Here you've created a sensual poem between two insensate and inanimate objects that's more romantic than a lot of romance poems. :)