Little Mistakes

Little Mistakes

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Jenni By The-realistic-ending Updated Aug 18, 2011

Isabelle Maurn has never had a boyfriend. She has wanted one for as long as she can remember. And she really wanted Kyle Lane. When Kyle and Isabelle were younger, they were great friends. They shared their first kiss at age 10. Then things broke off as they entered middle school. Kyle became more popular, and started to be quite a player, well as much as a middle schooler can be. Iz wasn't a geek, but she wasn't the school slut either. Then, freshman year of High School came. Iz's best friend Courtney McDeve, or Court, finally got asked out by who she claims the love of her life, Josh DiRevelon. Court has been in love with him since as long as she can remember, and now the dream came true. But what high school story ever ends perfectly? Isabelle ends up losing her best friend, and potentially, the boy she's in love with. It's not like she ever had him, but now it seems like she doesn't have a chance.

The-realistic-ending The-realistic-ending Feb 24, 2011
@CountryStrong ahah, thanks. It was kinda just to get a feel of the characters, the chapters to follow have more information, but I also did want to keep them interested.
                              
                              
                              Jenni[:
The-realistic-ending The-realistic-ending Feb 24, 2011
@CountryStrong ahah, thanks. It was kinda just to get a feel of the characters, the chapters to follow have more information, but I also did want to keep them interested.
                              
                              
                              Jenni[:
CountryStrong CountryStrong Feb 24, 2011
I think you have great style of writing and your description of characters is really good. But I wish you'd of added more to the paragraphs, even though you did a good job of teasing the reader to keep them interested. :)
The-realistic-ending The-realistic-ending Feb 24, 2011
@CarinaBrm sorry, about the spacing, I'm not sure if wattpad exaggerates it, or if I make them all that big. tanks for reading though, I love feedback!
                              
                              
                              Jenni[:
The-realistic-ending The-realistic-ending Feb 24, 2011
@Kilo808 ahaha, I should be thanking you for reading
                              
                              
                              
                              Jenni[:
CarinaBachmann CarinaBachmann Feb 24, 2011
wow, i've never thought i would so much feel with a girl like this. you really pulled me in and i love the way you describe her feelings, just great!
                              i'ts just a bit irritating that you have so much space between the paragraphs.
                              but i'll read the rest of it.. ;)