Street chick + Rich Guy='Love' (AAM)

Street chick + Rich Guy='Love' (AAM)

35.7K Reads 300 Votes 11 Part Story
UniqueFlaws By UniqueFlaws Updated Jun 14, 2010

On hold in the works of re writing

ShylondaWallace ShylondaWallace Mar 15, 2015
What does she look like and can you put a picture with up of her hair please @uniqueflaws
Misz_Unique Misz_Unique Apr 26, 2011
Really good Chapter, a few errors so just read through it. =]
viviper viviper Mar 15, 2010
this is pretty good but i have to agree you need more length and more detail
                              but so far its really good
Seager99 Seager99 Mar 14, 2010
It's a good start, sounds like it could get really interesting!
UniqueFlaws UniqueFlaws Mar 12, 2010
@alicev: It's like a pass 2 get on2 a certain bus for kids under 16 which is free ....did that help ? : )
alicev alicev Mar 11, 2010
When you introduce Jerome, you move into a conversation mode like you're talking to the reader. This is acceptable if you start out that way though.