Wake me up.

Wake me up.

846 Reads 26 Votes 3 Part Story
mcr4eva By mcr4eva Updated Feb 25, 2011

Tori doesn't know what to do anymore, her family are dead, she has no friends and never has for that matter and everyone hates her. But its all because of one  person.  Zane. Tori has to escape from her old life and find a new one but with Zane it just gets much harder. But along with all these problems she has to face the biggest one of all. Her dreams. Will she succeed and find her new life or will everything come crashing down on her, she may fail in the end but its worth a shot if she can get what she wants... but not all stories have happy endings...

blue-eclipse blue-eclipse Aug 18, 2011
i'm enjoying the book so far, and am defiantly going to continue reading. voted.
trishthewriter trishthewriter Mar 20, 2011
I thought the beginning was nice. There was a real hook there. I did notice a bit of jumping between past and present tense even in the same sentences. There were also just a few punctuation errors. That aside, the story seems promising. Voted and am reading on. 
- - Mar 20, 2011
Great job, it flowed real well and had a great realistic quality to it!
Bloodynewmoon Bloodynewmoon Mar 20, 2011
Great so far, but you should put stuff like 'Two weeks later' in bold rather than using ellipses.
AvengedSevenfoldGirl AvengedSevenfoldGirl Mar 20, 2011
this is an amazing story!
                              I love the writing style and the story line has great potential. I cannot wait to keep reading! - but i have a french assesment to write so i will add it to my library and read it all later :)
                              *votes*
IBreakHearts IBreakHearts Mar 20, 2011
Sometimes I wish life was a dream too... lol anyway great story *voted*