The Supers

The Supers

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Ryan Derbyshire By ryan0ry Updated Jan 20, 2011

In an alternate Universe the Supers are the defenders of Earth. In this Universe however, events that happened in our Universe, are being caused by the Supers nemesis. And his name is Tomasa, the most evil being on the planet, and legend has it that he has lived for two thousand years. The Supers are the only thing in his way, they are the only ones stopping him taking over the world.

SDenglerInc SDenglerInc Nov 27, 2011
its' really good, but a decription of Ryan might be nice. 
                              othe5rwise it's all really good.
ryan0ry ryan0ry Apr 04, 2011
Please post any feedback hear and any changes you think may be required.
                              R0R
SDenglerInc SDenglerInc Jan 19, 2011
really good it makes a lot more sense that when you tried explaining it to me.