Dark Abyss

Dark Abyss

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shaddowqueen By shaddowqueen Updated Jan 20, 2011

A collection of poems.
Succumb to my darkness.
My world.

chairsniffa chairsniffa Feb 07, 2011
Wow that was unexpected, perhaps only emotionally and mentally dead maybe?!? But still it is the shock factor of the last line that lingers in the mind of the reader so its a great ending!
chairsniffa chairsniffa Feb 07, 2011
You empathise well havng tried to relate to the mind of a killer, empathy is a valued quality for all great poets, because if you can empathise then you can make the audience empathise too!
shaddowqueen shaddowqueen Jan 22, 2011
@LeanneTheWriter aww thanks soo much really made my day ;€
stainedcolor stainedcolor Jan 22, 2011
wow, lots of imagery! (:  it really painted a picture in my mind, great for poetry, its like telling a story with feelings instead of just plain words.
shaddowqueen shaddowqueen Jan 19, 2011
@obsidianbutterfly13 yuu really think soo thanks thats sooo sweet lol ;€