A collection of poems.
Succumb to my darkness.
Wow that was unexpected, perhaps only emotionally and mentally dead maybe?!? But still it is the shock factor of the last line that lingers in the mind of the reader so its a great ending!
You empathise well havng tried to relate to the mind of a killer, empathy is a valued quality for all great poets, because if you can empathise then you can make the audience empathise too!
@LeanneTheWriter aww thanks soo much really made my day ;€
wow, lots of imagery! (: it really painted a picture in my mind, great for poetry, its like telling a story with feelings instead of just plain words.
@obsidianbutterfly13 yuu really think soo thanks thats sooo sweet lol ;€