Five Days of Elf [Wen Spencer's Elfhome]

Five Days of Elf [Wen Spencer's Elfhome]

256 Reads 33 Votes 5 Part Story
Olga Godim By olga_godim Completed

In this story, inspired by Wen Spencer's Elfhome universe, Lisa, a film school student from Vancouver, Canada, attends a local Shakespearean festival. When a gun-toting terrorist jumps on stage and starts shooting everyone, she could've been killed, together with many others, if not for a young man in a gray turban who risked his life stopping the shooter.

  • elf
  • elfhome
  • fanfiction
  • shortstory
  • urbanfantasy
  • vancouver
  • wattys2017
  • wenspencer
- - Apr 06
Great vocab I love it already its really dramatic and thrill-seeking as well
pionoplayer pionoplayer Jul 13
Whoa. This is a really good character defining moment for Lisa.
pionoplayer pionoplayer Jul 13
The last "spoke English with a faint accent" should probably go somewhere else, it breaks the flow a little bit positioned as it is.
Ink394 Ink394 Mar 11
-_-
                              There was just a shooting and your thinking about becoming a YouTube sensation?
pionoplayer pionoplayer Jul 13
This paragraph is missing a transition. It jumps from one thought to the next with no intervening period.
pionoplayer pionoplayer Jul 13
Wonderful first part. Right into the action, and does a wonderful job of defining Lisa and her place in the story right off the bat.